Breath 3

Between each breath,
between winter and spring –
stillness

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7 Responses to Breath 3

  1. aloha AlarmingMan. i like this haiku a lot. i like the comparison between great and small things in stillness. very appealing ku to me. aloha.

  2. emmylgant says:

    Yes. The between, neither here nor there…still or yet.

  3. really like the analogy between breath and the seasons.

  4. E A M Harris says:

    Lovely poem. It reminds us that the ‘in betweens’ are worth paying attention to.

  5. Ann Aither says:

    Love this. Beautifully expressed.

  6. ophelia says:

    This made me think of: I heard a Fly buzz – when I died – / The Stillness in the Room / Was like the Stillness in the Air – / Between the Heaves of Storm. And also when my music teacher told me that the silence between sounds was just important as the notes themselves. It’s a lovely haiku.

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