Between each breath,
between winter and spring –
aloha AlarmingMan. i like this haiku a lot. i like the comparison between great and small things in stillness. very appealing ku to me. aloha.
Thank you, Rick!
Yes. The between, neither here nor there…still or yet.
really like the analogy between breath and the seasons.
Lovely poem. It reminds us that the ‘in betweens’ are worth paying attention to.
Love this. Beautifully expressed.
This made me think of: I heard a Fly buzz – when I died – / The Stillness in the Room / Was like the Stillness in the Air – / Between the Heaves of Storm. And also when my music teacher told me that the silence between sounds was just important as the notes themselves. It’s a lovely haiku.
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