Old man 2

His walking stick
echoes through the mall –
advancing old age


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3 Responses to Old man 2

  1. Mike Powell says:

    The word “advancing” seems perfect. In a literal sense the old man is advancing with every step, as time is advancing in a metaphorical sense.

  2. Tanveer Rauf says:

    I agree with Mike Powell that advancing means that getting close to the end step by step.

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