Absorbed in her phone,
she doesn’t notice the dove
above her head
Never fast enough
Finally go numb
Wonderful contemplative write. So many times have witnessed such scenes-
Cubical life used to be a worry, now it seems some have wrapped the cubical all around themselves remaining walled-off where ever they go.
A doleful and intriguing societal write. Very peaceful, and sad. Lovely!
I love your turn of phrase there – nice way to sum it up: the cubical life…
How often the world takes us away for this mystery of being…. Love this one.
I can’t decide between beautiful or great, so I’m just going to say this haiku is awesome.
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