Skimming low the seagull spies,
a splash in the clouds
as they fly
Your haiku’s always make me feel transported. ;o)
Thank you, Sahbinah – much appreciated…
This one has a wonderful playful use of the words and their sounds to give us the full impact of the sight being conveyed. Lovely.
Thank you… I can’t quite take all the credit, though – it’s modelled on a beautiful haiku by Onitsura (translated by Sam Hamill) about a leaping trout…
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